so i went

and it was nice
                         [rare bloody-slice
                         treebark beef]

the house was most.empty on return
                          most emp tee
an allabout me   ee lek tri sit ee   tingled

                                                                                  in anotherlife it would be
                                                                                  (Da da daaaaa…….)LOVE

but oh, shhh, not here, notnow
sosilly silly silly

                                                                                (it was allfine ~  then you{shh, stop} said

your mouth is beautiful when you are thinking circles

                                                                                                                     see!  see!)

whata hullabaloo inme


~ by Beeskiffle on February 24, 2008.

4 Responses to “so i went”

  1. Stunning.

  2. I’m speechless, that stage setting, skintingling entrance, and the music, it is perfectly beautiful poetry,

  3. (((((((((((((((((you)))))))))))))))

    jumbling thoughts and mindflips to make beautiful swirls.

  4. Quite wonderfully profound, that one…

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